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Some people say that a good teacher is the person who teaches something well, which means that he or she helps students to understand something difficult well. Other people say that teachers’ role is not just offering knowledge that they have, but they should guide their students well for their future. Although it is true that teaching well is one part of important teachers’ roles, I think that helping students gain self- confidence for them to live happy in the future is more important. In this essay, I will briefly represent two reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, what the teacher should do for their students is not just offering specific knowledge. Of course, it is one of teachers’ roles. However, Special special knowledge can be offered by other sources including books, the Internet, and other specialist expect for teachers.except teachers. For these reasons, teachers should be required for other responsibilities for their students. In other words, they should guide their students for to their bright future. For this, teachers should encourage their students to do something, saying that they can do anything whatever they want to. You can see how important this is from what most successful persons people mention how teachers influence their life. Accordingly, I think that teaching well is not all that teachers do.
Secondly, some kinds of specific knowledge are not important for student in their whole life. In other words, specific knowledge does not make big influences on students’ life. In place of this, if students get self- confidence doing whatever they want, they can succeed in their lives. I believe that teachers are the persons people that they can let help students get self-confidence. That is because most students tend to listen to their teachers than their parents, and they teachers are in the position of educating their students. One of my friends, Jenny, did not have self-confidence. Even what she could do did she consider being able to do. One day, her teacher recognized her problem, so she consulted her and tried to encourage her to get self-confidence through some programs. Thanks to her teacher, she could get self-confidence, and now she becomes a professor in one of the best universities. Nowadays, she tries to encourage her students to do something for their future as her teacher did before.
In conclusion, I convince that teachers should try to encourage their students to get self-confidence rather than offer specific knowledge. That is because specific knowledge does not influence students’ lives so much, and helping them achieving something that is more important for their future. I think that teachers can be persons are the ones who make big influences for their students, they should play such roles.
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