■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :There is nothing that young people can teach older people | |
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It is often said that there is nothing that young people can teach older people because older people already have undergone their youth period in life.From my point of view,However, I think that there are several things that older people can learn from younger people.
First of all, All of older people is not always mature one than young people. In our society, Althugh most of adult are more polite and muture than young people, there are not few immature older people who don't observe social rules and are so rude. Also, young people are always immature and rude, they also can be well-mannered one. For example, I have one brother who is 13 years old. Because he have learned from strict parents, he can do many thing that his peer can't do such as cooking , cleaning. On the other hand, my friend who is 19 years old can't do even make instant food and so rude to adult.
On top of that In modern age, due to technological rapid development, older people don't have knowledge about technological inventment such as computer and cell phone. On the other hand, most fo young people are used to utilizing this inventment. For instance, my mother is not good at using computer so she always have problem in searching impormation through The Internet. But my sister who is just 8 years old can use the computer herself, she can search impormation for her homework ,play online-games and even make personal blog. So my mother always recieves helps from she's dauther.
It is not only our familiy's situations but also most family's thing in Korea
In conclusion, It is not always true to older people can't learn anything from young people. Because young people sometimes can be more mature one than older people and can teach many thing about technological items, I firmly believe tha young people also can teach old people. | |
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