When it's time to have a meal, some people prefer to eat by themselves whereas others prefer eating with their family. There has been an ongoing argument regarding an issue that having a meal together with families is not quite significant. Some people maintain that it is just a waste of time, because they are often busy with their works or studies. However, from my perspective, family should get together when eating a meal. I will present two reasons to support my opinion in this essay.
To begin with, eating together with family can strengthen the bonds. Generally speaking, In modern society, people are always bound to their works, and barely have time to be with their families. So, the members of the family feel seperated, and it eventually leads to awkward atmosphere among them. Family meal time, however, provides opportunity for members to gather, and have some conversation while eating. This will make them feel closeness and unity within the members. To illustrate, the more each member of the family eats seperately, the less they gather and spend time together. In result, a son will feel more awkward to see his father than meeting his friend, and relationship among the members will be worsen. On the other hand, a family that has a meal time together will likely to be harmonious, and thus, they will realize the true love of the family. As we can see, family meal time contributes to tightness of the family bonds.
Additionally, having a meal together will teach some crucial lessons to the children. In general, modern children are careless of their families, because they usually prefer eating a meal with their friends. In fact, they are not able to learn the proper table manner when eating with adults. However, eating a meal with family will let the parents to teach their children what the right table manner is. Children can learn not to talk when they have food in their mouth, not to litter their food, and many more. Hence, they will learn how important to have eating etiquette. For example, when I was an elementary school student, I usually ate dinner with my friends, thus I thought that littering food was just a normal thing. After my mother forced me to eat dinner with the family, I started to learn the table manners. As a result, I realized that littering food is a bad activity, and fixed my habit. Therefore, family meal time is necessary for children to learn the manner when eating.
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