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In modern society, some people think that high school students should be allowed to choose their favorite courses. On the other hand, some people and I prefer not to permit high school students to select their classes and dictate them to take several different classes. This is because having diverse classes will make easier for students to choose their major. Moreover, if students take classes that they like, their basic knowledge will be weak.
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Experiencing various subjects will allow high school students to have higher chance to choose proffer proper major for them. In contrast, if they were only exposed to one subject, they would not know what is the most suitable for them. As they have not tried several subjects, they might choose weakest subject for them and live forever with regret of their choice. According to ten years of research conducted by Seoul National University, ninety percent of students in college chose their major by experiencing myriad activities such as playing guitar; out-door activities, and basic subjects in high school. Other ten percent of students said that they had to alter their major because they did not try other subjects than indispensable subjects. For another example, my friend, Jack, was majoring in biology in high school, so he entered university majoring biology. However, after experiencing other activities in university, he changed his major in to practical music. If he had chance to meet with music in his high school life, he would not have wasted three years of his life. These examples show that taking several classes in high school is more merit choice to choose.
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If high school students begin to put all of his time and effort on what they like, their other subjects will be infirm. What students learn in high school is basic knowledge that people would should know of. Therefore, if students do not learn all subjects in high school, they could be looked down by other people. This is because people have a tendency of underestimate underestimating people who have less knowledge than them. For example, Jang min-cue, who is famous painter in Korea, said that he is weak at every other subject than art. He added that it was because he put his whole life into studying art. This means that he does not know stander standard level of knowledge that people have. This clearly indicates that studying what they like in high school is disadvantage choice than studying various subjects.
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In conclusion, it is beneficial to not permitting high school students to have a right to choose what they are going to take. This is because taking different classes will aid students to find their major. Also, students, who studied in various fields, their basic level of knowledge will be stronger than people who choose to learn only one subject.
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