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In the world, there are a lot of foods, clothes, money, books, and cell phones but people cannot have them all, and they do not have to have those things necessarily necessary to have. However, people always dream to have more and more(,) even though they have at least one of them. It is no doubt to say people have greed, so they do not satisfy with what they have. People always desire to have more and have what they do not have(,) because people have tendency to set goals to achieve and to love money characteristic to have goal to achieve, and love money.
To begin with, people do not satisfy with what they have because people tend to challenge and have new goal to achieve every time. 1. In life, people always have their own goal to achieve, but the thing is they always set new goal after they achieve it. The goal can be learning something new for students and having new possessions for adults For students it can be learning, and for adults it can be materials for their own life. For example, according to (most of) band classes in high school, the most of first player of each instrument section, they can play more than one instrument. Flute player also plays oboe or clarinet. The other case is for adults(,) that they dream to have career at first and would like to buy a car, but after they get it, then they dream another goal, which is to have a house. It goes on and on. Through most of people’s life style, they set another goal right after they make some achievements as soon as people make achievement they require the other goal to be set up to challenge. Hence, satisfying with what they have is not possible to people.
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In addition, in terms of money people cannot gratify what they have. It is within bounds to say that people’s most of activities of people are closely related to are relates with earning money. Even though people have enough money to live, they never stop earning money(,) because they always pursue better and higher quality of life with money. For example, people usually earn around $2000 for full time job, and that amount of money which is reasonable amount to maintain their lives. However, there are a lot of people who have more than one job, even 5 more part time jobs (to earn more). People would like to save store their money for future. The other example is(,) that even the rich like to obtain more money(,) so they get bribe from the other people. The president of Korea Du-Hwan Jun accepted bribe which became part of his asset/wealth had a lot of money from bribe during his term. Thus(,) it can be said that people cannot satisfy with what they have especially financial issue people cannot be said satisfy what they have.
To conclude, people are liable to have greed and they try to get what they do not have. People cannot satisfy with be satisfied with their situation themselves(,) because people always enforce themselves to challenge and achieve the new goal. Also, people always want to have more money more and more. Therefore, people’s life cannot be satisfied forever.
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