■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Taking job during a teenage life. Agree disagree | |
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With a fair amount of chaos, world society has recently faced the worst econmic downturn. Even the most developed countries such as the United States of America and Britian are facing a plunging rate of unemployment and jobless people on the street. Against this backdrop, it is often mentioned that young adults should get prepared for future career as early as possible. In this vain, I personally believe it is not a bad idea to take a job during a teenage life for several reasons.
First off, earing money is a real experience in what it is like in a society. That is, earing money is the hardest but the most worthwhile and the most productive work in society. So it can work as a preparing stpes for teenagers to know how society is like and how they would make money when they really get an official job when they grow up.
What is more, taking a job during a teenage life can teach teenagers about an importanct of money. As more than majority of teenagers in Korea get pocket money by their parents and take if for granted, it is vital to have a correct and clear idea about how money should not be wasted. When teeangers get involved in productive works and earn even a small amount of money, students inevitably will feel gratified about money and would not easily sqander it as they have been in the past.
Last but not least, teenagers taking jobs can mature them into a responsible and independent individual. That is, having a responsibility and commitment to oneself's actions or behaviors can be greatly earned by taking a job. No matter how good or bad the position they are applied to, teenagers natuarally learn how to become independent and matured to have a responsibility in one's actions.
It is clear that taking a job is certainly not an easy task for teenagers. Even quite a number of adults face troubles about taking jobs and earning money through it. However, teenagers can earn not only money but valuable experiences through taking jobs, wihch are learning to become independent , responsible, and awarness of how real society is like.
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