■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Lending money to friend does not break friendship
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I agree with the statement that lending money to friend does not break friendship. For one thing, to lend money to the friend, the relationship with the friend is better than ever. Also, it is beneficial to earn the money.
First, lending money to friend would make a good friendship. Some people argue that in today's society, we should never believe not only our friends, but also family members when we rent anything. However, by doing so, we might feel a sense of isolation about our lives. Given this, lending currency to friend needs to feel a sense of comfort and helps the relationship with people around me to be good. Take my case as an example. When I was in high-school, I had many friends who were kind, smart, and lovely. Suddenly, one of my friends requested me to lend some money. Although I had much money and the friend was the best friend for me, I rejected his request because I had a belief that I never rent my having to anyone in my life. So, my behavior had been spread in my class, and no one contacted with me. From my experience, lending money to friend is necessary to maintain good relationships.
Moreover, lending money to friend would give me to be benefit . Because I am able to earn much interest about renting my money , I would lend some money to my friends. | |
많이 부족한데요 ㅠ 시간이 부족한건 여전하네요 ㅠㅠ 단어수도 많이 부족하고ㅠㅠ 이렇게 되면 어느정도 점수가 될까요?ㅜㅜㅜㅜ 단어는 238 개래요 ㅠㅠ 휴 ㅠㅠ 시간부족은 안써봐서 그런가요ㅠ