Many people say that it is better for teenagers to study because they have no time to study to get good grade when they have to work. However, from my perspective, there are many benefits to have jobs at early ages. This is because they are available to learn lots of abilities that help them in career. Also, they can realize the value of money.
To begin with, students can get a lot of skills that other students who just study hard does not aquire at school. Many people argues that teenagers who have a job get poor score at school because they are very busy to earning money. However, students in workplace can manage to control their time efficient that learned from work : sense of responsibility, puncuality, social skill,etc. Many experts have verified that working at early age can help the young people to behave more adults than their peers . This is because they socialize with many people and experience many events. So, it is recommned that students should have a job while they attend a school.
Also, having a job brings about students can learn the value of hard earned money. There are many teenagers who spend a lot of money without knowing the importance of that. We can notice that the different attitude between students who get allowance from parents and the other ones who earn their allowance. Teenagers who have a jobs spend money when they really have to buy something and save money as soon as possible. For example, My friend, suji, worked at ice cream store while she was students. Although she was very busy to working in a booming with a number of people, she paid 100$ at most once a month, and most of money goes into bank account. She always told to me that she want to waste of money , but she earned so hard that she could buy nothing but goods she really want to and need. In this regard, earning money directly can not compare with just getting allowance from parents.
To summarize, juvenile should earn money at the same thime they study. This is because they can acquire many skills not obtaining just study. In addition, they can learn know the importance of money through hard working.
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