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These days, the older who retired older people after retirement have more time than the younger younger and enough assets. Therefore, they seems to enjoy life more than the younger people. However, my idea is totally different. The young younger people have more passion and energy which the older cannot have. 1. Based on these resources, they
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2. 노인들 혹은 젊은이들에 대한 표현이 the older 이나 the younger 로만 제한되어있는 것 같아서 중간중간 다른 것들로 바꾸었습니다.
First of all, young people are willing to take challenges because young people they have more energy, in terms of physical condition, than the older, in terms of physical condition, they are willing to enjoy taking challenges. The younger usually have a good body shape, well-balanced body, but the older always need extra nutrition. Based on health With their health, many young people travel all over the world and learn tough sports such as fly-diving. For example, one of my friends who is 23 years old, travelled all oll over the world on the foot, not taking any transportation. During the trip, he could meet many different people such as the African native. After the trip, he could broaden can broad his experience and he realize that society where he belongs/ lives is too (so) small. If he were old, Could he cross the country on foot if he were old on the foot? I don't think so.
Second of all, the older people are, the harder they get new experience. According to the statistics, the young people usually learn something, which can be second language and playing musical instruments faster than the older such as learning the second language or to play the guitar. Therefore, if the older and the younger younder start to learn the same foreign language at the same time, the older should spend more time on studying to master the language. Even if he mastered learning the language (he learned), his pronunciation prounciation is poorer than the young the younder's one. In addition, youth is accustomed to using technology such as like the internet and thus through the internet, they can take watch internet lectures and experience different cultures on web.
In conclusion, I believe that the younger can enjoy life more than the older(,) considering physical condition and ability to learn something new. Even though the older have wisdom and wider experiences, the younger younder have more passion and energy enengy, in order to be willing enough to take challenges.
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