Topic : Government should focus more on preserving nature and less on the economic development.
Today, some people think that government should focus more on preserving nature and less on the economic development. I agree with the idea for the following reason. First, the profit of the environment plays important role on the other area. Second, it is harder to reserve the nature than economic development.
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First, profit of the environmental protection has important role on many areas. protecting environment make profis and it has important role on many areas. Many people think that benefit of the environmental protection confines only to the environment and it is unrelated to other area. However, these thought is not true. In fact, the protection of environment provides our society a lot of benefits. For example, dense forests in Korea are indispensible on for forest commodity and tourism commodity, which are two major cash cows in the nation. They also provide people a place to take rest from their daily stress in city. and Due to the protection of envrionment people can have more healthy food and fresh air. Moreover, a clean forest provides children a place to educate the nature. In this regard, it is essential to preserve nature.
Second, people should put more effort on preserving nature rather than on economic development. The history shows that the economy follows the cycle’s ups and down, but it could not be applied to the environment. While the economy can be reversed by government’s policies, the environment cannot be undone by best policy. According to a survey, forests in AMAZON are destroying being destroyed at record pace. The pace of deforestation is so rapid that the 30% of the forests have been destroyed by now. The survey also reveals that it would take a century to fully reverse the forest. Therefore, if the government thinks the economic development is more important, the government should be given a second thought about its thinking.give a second thought about protection of environment and economic development.
In conclusion, because of due to the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that the environment is more important than the economy and the government should take care about protecting the environment.