■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people loke doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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From invention of 증기 engine, the field of industry started develop drastically. Mass production have rendered possible, and many companies have earned huge profits. Machines have replaced labors of human instead of people. Today, a variety of machines are used at home and help chores. Not only that, office machines play important role at work. Some people still prefer do household or office work by hands. I think that using machines bring many benefits.
First, a machine save time and labor of people. Some machines do work very faster than people. Let's think of a copy machine. Before invention of a copy machine, people should write or type in person to make copies. It takes long time and labor. But a copy machine totally change this. All I should do for making copies is just putting original one into copy machine and wating only few seconds. The another example is a dishwasher. In my conutry, Korea, many people clean dishes by hands, and I did like that. After I came in the U.S, I started use dishwasher and can save more time. Instead of cleaing dishes, I spend that time studying English, reading books, or talking with family. Finally, I earn more free time owing to the machine.
On top of that, machine shows always standarized results. People sometime make mistakes. Especially, the quaility of works is affect by worker's condition such as level of tireness or concentration. But machines work according to the algorisms that are previously inputted and make identical results everytime. Using machine reduces a concern for quality of results. Go back to a copy machines. People might mispell copying original one and subtle mistakes could change largely the meaning or information. But a copy machine never does. The machine create complete copy that includes utterly identical contens.
To sum up, machines save time and labor, and make standarized results. Therefore I can trust the work by machine and prefer to use machine doing works. | |
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