■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
High schools should allow students to study the courses that they want to study. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people say that high schools should allow students to study the curses that they want to study.
I strongly agree on that opinion with following reasons. First, when they have an opportunity to choose the courses that they want, they can have more time to improve their own ability. Not only that those unnecessary subjects could make students to be pressed.
First of all, when there are a chance to choose their own curriculum in high school, it provides student
chnace to improve their own ability. For example, if there is a student who wants to be a doctor, he does not need to take classes such as music or art class. It is more better to put his energy, time, money and study for being a doctor. There are more important and necessary subjects for those students who are already ready for their own future. If school provides proper courses and makes students to choose for themselves, it will be very helpful to them.
Secondly, there are too many unnecessary subjects in high school and those makes students to be pressed. There might be some students who are not interested in biology, mathematics or sociology which are mandatory subjects in high school. When those students have to study those subjects, it will give them much stress. When I was in high school, I was not interested in science. However, it was mandatory subject for the 1st grade. I just can remember that I studied science with crying and stress for the exam. And becuase of science I could not focus on other subjts.
Stuying unnecessary subjects can be an obstacle to study necessary subejects for students.
High school is a place where students can spend their time for their future. Getting a stress and putting much time and studying to other courses which they do not want, can not help them. I strongly believe that high school should allows students to choose the courses that they want to learn so that they can be ready for their future. Moreover, taking unnecessary subjects lead student to get much stress and
this will disturb students to study necessary and important subjects. | |
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