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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :The best way to learn about life is by listening ti the advice of friends and family. Do you agree or disagree ? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Most people often meet disappointing and frustrating events. We need to some advices from others, somone to advice such as friends and family at that time. Some people think that personal experience is the best way to learn about life. However, I totally agree with that the great method to learn about life is by listening carefully to the advice of from friends and family.
First of all, One one cannot experience all aspects of life on by one's own. Different people have different experience, so we have their advise and help when we meet hard time and ordinary times also.we need their advice and that help us when we face hard time and this also refers to ordinary people. For exemple, In particular, mathmatics subject was difficult for me, when I was a high school student. My friend, named Ju hyun was very helpful when it comes to math. Therefore I could have solve uneasy problems of from math assignments and got good grades.
Moreover, friends and family can give more useful advices. They really know you well and have similar experiences. From my experience, my mother was always a good adviser and listener to me. She didn't say negative words to me. She encouraged me with affirmative attitude , so I could have overcome any trials. In this sense, your families and friends always give you best advices always, because they know who you are and have resembling experiences.
In short, I strongly believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of friends and family. The reasons are that one cannot experience all aspects of life on by one's own and they give you practical adives , because they know you well and have similar experiences. At the and end of the day, you need to always listen carefully to your friends and family 's adivices. | |
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