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It has been argued that students are influenced more by friends than by teacher. I disagree that teachers have an influence on students more than friends do. First, students are easily affected by teacher through character education. Second, a good advice from teacher is likely to make students life change.
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Above of all, it is easy to have influence on student by doing character education. Some students may be influenced by friends. However, teacher have many impacts on students through education. Let me take a middle school for instance. The school is distinguished from others by a well-rounded education. Teachers do not devote themselves only to making make students do better academically. Instead, they are devoted to enjoy varied social and cultural activities with students in and out of school. While enjoying fun activities with classmate, school kids are able to socialize with others and learn about a sense of community. More importantly, students are never alone at all times. Amiable teachers always stay with them helping them discover their talents and potential. Not surprisingly, students in the school perform better without study and their stress is less than those in other strict schools. However, every teacher is not like my teacher but most teachers are trying to teach their students with hot passion. A wide range of friends are also important part of student’s life at a extend.
Furthermore, student have duty to follow what their teachers educate. Some students might be more influential to build a character. However, if when a student did not take a good chance to be taught by teacher, there would be fat chance to achieve success by himself. Here is my friend’s case. When I was in middle school, a friend of mine who was not focus on learning math was always took a sleep when teacher had his class. Looking back on it now, that was quite an absurd behavior. The math teacher always taught my friend personally even after finishing class. A few year ago, I bumped into him by chance on a street and I found out the truth that he surprisingly became a math teacher. He said that due to the math teacher of middle school, my friend wanted to be a teacher like him. This demonstrated teacher’s influence may change someone’s life.
In conclusion, I disagree?????????????agree that teachers have influence on students more than friends for the reasons that I have mentioned above.
First it is easy to affect student by teacher students are easily affected by teaches. Second, students life will be easily change by teacher’s interesting interest with warm words.
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