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We have leader who has average character such as avoiding humble, maintaining only his opinion, and minding others opinions in this society. Although it seems stereotypes but it is true that kind of president of company still exists nowadays. In my point of view, I think that leaders should better listen to other people’s word otherwise company should not cannot be developed well. There are several reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, if leaders take worker’s opinion seriously, they can easily build up their company’s achievement easily. In addition, it can be also leader’s capacity to accept others opinion because sharing and putting into action is one of the significant abilities which can be effect effective to company’s accomplishment efficiently. For example, if workers cannot advice negative opinion about leaders’ idea, leader will keep think his opinion is as perfect and assume that other people already agreed. That is big mistake and it can reduce economic profits.
Secondly, In general, people cannot make impress all people impress. It is also true that leaders hardly realize the fact that they cannot be perfect to meet all people. With this reason, leaders should think back of their attitude and change their mind to be better leader. For example, if they allow themselves to accept others advices and think leaders should learn over and over again, most people would consider them as a good leader.
In conclusion, despite, Generally, leaders do not agree with that they should pay attention to others opinion in order to keep their right. However, according to the opinion I mentioned above, I believe that if they hope the company to progress more and better, leaders keep it in mind that it can be more right to listen to workers or other people’s words than holding his conservative ideas.
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