Topic : Young people enjoy life more than older people. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent recession of global market, the problem of unemployment among young people has emerged serious problem in Korea society. This problem makes young people think older people can have more freedom in their life because older people have much amount of money to take a trip freely and aren't stressed out getting a job. But I strongly believe that young people are most liberal generation because they are physically healthier and less have obligation they take care of.
To begin with, there is no question that young people are physically healthier than older people. Staying fit means that he has a wide range of choosing option they want to do. Although older people have stable financial condition, they can't do anything pursuing physically demanding activities such as bungee jumping, paragliding, and trekking. For example, my grandfather once went on trip a variety of foreign place with even no money. And he went trekking to Himalaya. Likewise, He liked to go around and live actively. But, as he was older and older, Now, He misses that time whenever he sees my playing in sport game. He always says that you can do whatever you want to do in young age.
Moreover, the number of obligation young people have to care for is much smaller that that of older people. As people age, responsibilities such as financial problem, children's education and promotion in working begin to burden them down. We usually tend to think young people are brave and even reckless. This is because that young people don't have what they care for. From their experience, the value of getting thing including enjoying, valuable experience, and friendship is much higher that the value of losing. For instance, I went on vacation to Europe for 6 months. I don't have to pay attention anything in my common life. I freely enjoyed I could make many foreign friends in visiting place. Conversely, my uncle had wife and two daughters. And He always was tied up with his work. One day, He luckily got a vacation to Europe from his company. He expected that he could get rid of stress from his work. But, during vacation, He continually picked up the calling from company and took care of his children and was worry about expense whenever their wife bought expensive souvenir. He was so envy when I went on trip alone.
To summarize, young people can enjoy their life than older people. Since not only stay they fitter than older people, but also don't have responsibilities that they have to care. Young people should be enjoying their lifetime that is irreparable
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