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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :Some people think that they can learn better by themsleves that with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer?? | |
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▶ Your Answer : Many people believe that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. However, I think it is better to learn with a teacher because we can get accurate knowledge within short time. Also, we can learn how to respect others which is vert very important lesson in our life.
The first and foremost, we can get accurate knowledge form from a teacher within short time. Generally, teachers are professionals in their field of studies. Thus, they know almost all thing about the contents that they teach. If we learn with a teacher, we can gain accurate knowledge. Moreover, we can easily understand all the contents because we can ask questions right away and get the answers. Therefore, it will not take too much time to learn if we are with teachers. In this way, we can learn within short time and get accurate knowledge if we learn with teachers.
learn with teachers라는 말이 좀 많네요, taught by teachers라고 쓰셔도 됩니다.
그리고 간단한 예시 하나 정도 추구해주세요, 더 설득력있습니다.
Second of all, Secondly, we can learn additional things such as learning how to respect others. Not only an accademical academical study but also some lessons about life is important. One of the lessons that can affect us is to learn how to respect others. This is important because it is the fundemental attitude we should show always. always have to show. We can learn this by studying with a teacher. Generally, most teachers are much older than students so, students can learn how to respect them during the classes. Asking questions, answering questions, or whatever students do, teachers can teach how to do all things in respectful manner. In this way, we can learn additional thing from teachers :How to respect others.
In conclusion, I prefer to learn with a teacher because I can get accurate knowledge within short time and learn important lesson in our life:How to respect others. | |
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