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Have you ever travelled traveld alone? When I came to Canada 2years ago, I was so excited to travel by myself. I can't ignore the benefit of traveling alone(.) which was comfortable in moving and deciding. that is comfortable to move and decide etc has lots of benefit. (Aside from what is mentioned, there are more things to earn through going travel alone) However it can't be compared to the goodness of traveling with someone. Traveling with others a companion is way more fun and helpful.
è 처음부터 자신의 경험에 대한 이야기를 하고 있는데요, 이것보다는 객관적이고, 포괄적으로 서술해주는 것이 좋습니다. 개인적인 경험과 같은 구체적인 예는 본론에서 다뤄주시는 것이 좋습니다. ^^
To begin with, sharing the feeling with others while you are traveling is the best benefit of companioned traveling. Even though you see some great things and experience something special, you could not be that happy without sharing the feeling. When you sharing feeling and talking each others, you might feel (that) it is abundant and memorable the emotions you could feel will be more abounded and will be more memorable. Even though I could do whatever I want when I traveled alone, it is lonely in some way.
Furthermore, when you travel with others, you could get a helped easily in an exact time you need it appropriate time. You could be in a difficult situation during the traveling(.) especially when you are in a new area you have never been. And it could be really dangerous to walk at night in the night or sleep alone/ by oneself. Therefore, in this case, traveling with a companion is better and safe.
There is one old saying(,) that "many hands make work lighter light work." And it is not only applicable in working limited in the situation of working, it is accepted when we are in travel but acceptable in traveling. As the experinced person of traveling alone, I experienced it, traveling alone, so that I strongly recommend (you) to travel with other people a companion. It is not only funny but also very useful as I mentioned above. Two is always better than one.
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