■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Topic: Having a low-paying secure job is better than having a high-paying job which can easily be lost. A or D? | |
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Some people say that having a low-paying secure job is better than having a high-paying job which can easily be lost. i agree that having a low-paying secure job is better for two reasons. First, To have a job is more and more harder. Second, to enjoy life is more important than having a high-paying job.
Most of all, first, To have a job is more and more harder Companies in my countries are now facing many challenges at home and abroad. The domestic economy is weakening due to recession. Worse, competitions in the global market are getting tougher and tougher. Other countries are developing new and innovative technologies. Imported goods have been pouring in since the market was opened. Naturally, the job market is getting tighter and tighter. The growing number of people lose their jobs and job competitions are tough. Consequently, only those who are experienced and highly-qualified can land a job and retain it. Accordingly, schools which offer job-specific courses can entice students. Students put great time and money into acquiring vocational qualifications outside of school. Employed people are no exception. Some go to business school at night.Staying the same means they are more likely to lose their jobs. Overtime work and challenging jobs are not something that they can refuse to do. They keep sharpening their job skills and expanding business contracts to get an opportunity to advance to a better and more stable workplace. Under the circumstance, have a job is more and more hader. This shows high-paying job which can easily be lost can not be appeal.
In addition to, high salary is not important in my life. My uncle's name is Tom Johnson, He graduated form Princeton business school, specialzing in account. When we talked to each other on the street, he always told me how much he was stressed his job. he only sleep 3hours everyday. he went through more and tougher competitions in his companies. Anyone in any feild will make his salary if he or she makes as much effort as he has made. In this shows, to enjoy life is more important than having a high-paying job.
In conclusion i agree having a low-paying secure job is better than having a high-paying job which can easily be lost for the reasons that I have mentioned above. First, having a job is more and more harder. Second, to enjoy life is more important than having a high-paying job.
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