We can hear some people say that the goal of education is to help people educate themselves. Although this idea is right in some way, I strongly disagree with this opinion. Rather, the purpose of education should aim at helping people educate others. Here I present two reasons to support my thought.
First of all, the idea that education should be to encourage people to educate other people plays a pivotal role to make a better society. It is mainly because the purpose of education is to build better communities rather than make perfect individuals. Furthermore, if people are trying to educate others with their own knowledge and skills, our society will have more possibility to solve various social problems. (어떠한 방법으로 사회적 문제들을 고칠 수 있는지에 대한 구체적인 설명이 필요합니다)
In addition, education for others will motivate people to learn more. The reason is that the goal of education lies on selfless motivation rather than selfish desire. A recent survey conducted by Korea National Institute of Education revealed that about 75% of participants who were studying in colleges regarded their purpose of study as contribution to other people and the society. Moreover, 12% of them told that they could sacrifice their educational achievement for others in need. (더 구체적인 설명이 필요할 거 같습니다)
For these reasons, I would like to suggest that the purpose of education is not for personal succeed success but for helping others succeed, which will lead us to the way of building a better society.
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