주제는 대학생활이 우리에게 도움이 되는가에 대한 주제입니다 원래 300자
이상 써야 하지만 시간이 부족하여 300자를 채우지는 못했습니다 평가
해주시고 문법적으로도 틀린 부분도 알려 주셨으면 합니다. 항상 고수님들의
조언 들으며 열심히 하겠습니다 읽어주셔서 감사합니다. 30분 과정이고 독립
에세이입니다.
The college years are the best time in a person's life
Do you agree of disagree with this statement?
Give reasons to support your opinion |
I agree about the college years are the best time in a person's life. There are many reason that the college is good for our life.
First. If we graduate the college without problem we can get a more nice job than people who is not attended the graduate. of course everyone is not like this. But on average it tend to advantage graduated college people.
Second. Since we go to the college, we can meet many kind of people and specially people who go to the college are more thoughtful and nice. so we can make really nice friend to be able to help in the future through the college .
lastly. the Courses of the college usually teach us to adapt the social community. because the college is one of the biggest education program in our life. and their's goal is to make us more smart and help to be able to live successful life.
so when we graduate college, we can feel that something is changed of me mentally or physically whatever. we are going at the middle of life. Now that we are can everything because we are young we should focus on the study to prepare successful life. |