the vest way to learn about life is listening to the advice of friends and family |
Some people argue advices and supporting from neighbors, such as teachers, friends, and family is the best way to learn about life. They assume that people by themselves can not fulfill enough experience to realize what life is whereas, people who are aided by seniors or their colleagues absorb various counsels and have less possibility to ‘deviate’ during the life such as becoming juvenile delinquent due to unanchored self-realization. However, in my opinion, those ‘deviation’ they mention as negative source are the true knowledge they ought to seek for. Through the process of overcoming the difficulties by themselves, they can truly accomplish to be a matured adult. It is undeniable that people naturally desire for simple affairs and wants to find short cuts as possible. In this case, the short cuts represent continued assistance from the supporters even to the basic affairs that need to be fulfilled by an individual himself. If this inappropriate offer remains unceasing, the individual changes to excessively rely on other people and loose strength to stand alone. For example, a saw a son of a rich man, who always get helped by surrounding people such as maids, his mom, and his tutors. Eventually, this man couldn’t afford to take care of him self after his age of 20, and still in his parent’s house getting breed by other people. Contrarily, individuals disciplined to surmount their encounters by their strength show high percentage of success when independence. A study demonstrates, that most of the man accomplished success by self-supporting had experiences of triumph against difficulties by themselves. This shows that people who successfully adopted to an environment of self-supporting lasts forever and ensures the future success of the individuals. In conclusion, according to my two paragraphs, immoderate supporting fails the individuals’ lives whereas providing capacity to stand alone enriches their future. Thus, I strongly disagree with the statement; it is better to listen to other people's advices than your own.
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