TV나 movies 가 아이들에게 나쁜 영향을 끼친다. |
Some people say that young boys and girls can learn positive things by watching TV or movies. However, I agree with the idea that mass media including TV and movies has more negative impacts than positive ones on children for two reasons. First, many of children can be exposed to violent or sexual scenes on TV. Second, students buy unnecessary objects related to main characters on TV shows.
First of all, today, altough the broadcast time for adult TV programs is limited, children are still vulnerable to these unhealthy programs. The reason is that many teens sleep late because of overloading works from school unlike in the past. In addition, most parents are working parents and come home late at night. Therefore, the children spend their time watching TV programs including violent or sexual scenes as they wait their parents to return. The recent studies indicated that most juveniles who committed crimes had seen contents on mass media aimed for older people. In this sense, mass media such as TV and movies negatively influence young children. Second, most of children do not have enough judgment to know what are necessary things or not for themselves. As young boys and girls view the main character of their favorite cartoon they feel that they want to have the character or one’s weapons. So they frequently ask their parents to buy the merchandises like the character’s things. Let me take my experience for example. When I was ten years old, I liked watching a cartoon on TV. At that time I was loving the 'snoopy' which was main character in my favorite cartoon. In deed, I really wanted to live with snoopy in my home. Therefore, although my mother disagreed that she bought me the snoopy doll I eventually got the doll. Now, I’m thinking that the doll was not necessary to me. In addition, I know that the producers of the character products contract with the producers of the programs which attract many children to like the characters. This shows that children can be influenced negatively by TV or movies. To sum up, I strongly agree with the idea that mass media including TV and movies have negative influence for young people for those reasons which I mentioned above. First, young people can be violent so it can raise the young people's crimes. Second, the programs can make children buy unnecessary things. |
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