■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? | |
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In today's modern society, many people get stress for making their lives. As the business get hardship globally, people get more burden to work. Thus, there are several ways that they can reduce their stress such as by doing something what they like to do and having conversation of any subjects.
As people have any stressful circumstances, people usually meet their friends and share some hobbies together, so they can reduce their stress. When people meet their friends or families, they can enjoy any subjects that they are interested in. For instance, all of my best friends have a same hobby with me, which is we really like to go to museum to watch great paintings. As we enjoy to see them together and sharing opinions about them, we feel comfort and good because we have common hobbies that we can enjoy together and we can escape our stressful reality for a moment by enjoying our hobbies.
Furthermore, by sharing people's opinions and advice with their friends or families, they could get solutions for their difficulties and they could reduce their stress by just talking. For example, if any of my friends have problem, we discuss about it to get a great solution for her. Just counselling is sometimes good to reduce stress because we feel stable to know that we have friends who always listen to our concerns beside us. Moreover, if we could get any solutions for difficulties, we are happier to solve them.
Therefore, if people have any difficulties and stressful lives, it is good to meet their friends or families to enjoy their hobbies and have conversation. As they enjoy their hobbies, they could reduce stress by escaping their reality just a moment and by sharing opinions of any concerns, they also can reduce stress. | |
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