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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Technology designed to make people's lives simpler often turns out to make them more complicated. Do you agree or disagree?
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People in modern society often consider the lives of their ancestor as were squalid(지나치게 안좋은 뉘앙스; 쓰셔도 되지만 저같음 inconvenient정도로 쓸 거같아요), and want to live in a developed future. Disparity between past and future life is caused by technologies, in other words, the thought were was based on the idea that technologies provide them with convenience. Thus I believe that technologies developed for convenience facilitate lives of people work properly. If it did not, it they(=technologies)would be disappeared and people still invest a fortune to designing technologies.
To begin with, it is true that technology functions well because it is still in its extant. Accorting to the principal of evolution, something harmfull or futile quickly is quickly obliterated, but the technologies for convenience remains remained. This means that the technologies are useful. For example, a refrigerator is designed to make fresh food easily accessible to people. It is was invented from long ago, and mankind have used it ever since. without desrting. It This implies that the technology simplifies human life. converts convolutions in people's lives to simple one in.
In addition, the disadvantage of the poor compared with the rich is simplicity which is caused by technology prove the utilitarian features the technology has. In addition, the difference between the rich and the poor is convenience provided by technology, and this proves the utalitarian features the technology have. -문법만 고친 내용. In addition, people spend a lot of money on these developed gadgets or wares which proves that they bring convenience to people. -suggestion. Many people who are lacking in money want to make a fortune because they are eager to lead wealthy lives that give amenities to them.
Amenities are engendered relieve by relieved stress from by not dealing with complicated stuffs. According to a survey, people with a lot of properties are more pleased than those who always are deficient of money. The the former subjects answered that they think the money allow them not to cope with such intricate problems since they have solved it by buying highly developed equipment. stuffs.
In conclusion, Because it still remains and people feel like it offers them convenience, the technology concoct with serves the purpose that simplify people's lives works well. |
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