After graduation from high school, students should take a year off to travel or work before going to the university
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Some people say that it is not good that students take a year off to travel or work after graduation from high school. However, I agree with the idea that students should spend a year before they get into a university for two reasons. First, they can learn many things which are necessary in college life. Second, as the students have many their own time, they can be motivated to study hard in college. First of all, high school graduates are able to become more confident as they work and have many experiences which are important in college life with other students. Truly, some people may think that spending a year after graduation from high school is time-consuming. However, university life differ form high school’s one. Students who become a freshman in college immediately could not adapt to a college life well due to unfamiliar with people and life style. So, the students need to have enough time to prepare for the university lives. We often hear that some freshman gave up his school when he started his college life instantly because he were not enough confident to adjust the life. Under this circumstance, as students have many experiences, they can be more confident so they are able to adapt to any life with anyone. In this sense, high school graduates should have a year to prepare for their school life. Second, students who graduate from high school immediately are tire because to strict school academic schedules and the national university entrance exam. Most of them have did their best to study in order to get into their favorite university. So they have not had enough time to enjoy their favorite experiences which relieve their stress. Let me take my brother for example. My brother is in the last year of high school. So he always stays at school until late night preparing for the national university entrance exam. In deed, in weekends which he does not go to school he always go to schools library for the exam. Almost all of high school students are in similar situation. Under this circumstance, the high school graduates have to have enough time to enjoy their habit such as travel. If they are refreshed, they would be able to study hard in university. This shows that they should be given a year to rest. To sum up, I agree with the idea that students who graduate from high school should be given a year to travel or work before going to the university for those reasons which I mentioned above. First, students can be more confident. Second, they can be refreshed. |