교사들은 의사, 변호사들 만큼의 salary 받아야 한다. (첨삭 부탁드려요~) |
Some people might say that teachers do not play a role in our society as much as doctors or lawyers. However, I agree with the idea that teacher should be given salary as much as doctors or lawyers for two reasons. First, most of teachers have not enough their own free time due to preparing for their class as doctors and lawyers does. Second, teachers can teach their students more enthusiastically. First of all, many of teachers devote their much time to their students because they have incomparable responsibility to their children. Let me take my teacher for example. When I was in the second year of high school, my homeroom teacher had spent much time with me in order to prevent being bullied and bullying. At that time, there were distrust form each member. So, my teacher spent a lot of time concerning about how to solve the problem among class members. As the solution to this problem, my teacher came up with an idea that they build a good relationship with their students. He had many experience with them even after school. As they spent much time together, they knew that all each student had their own strongpoint and talent. Naturally, students can understand each other better. The teacher could not have been able to solve the problem, if he had not spent his time which even includes his free time. In this sense, teachers are worthwhile to be paid as much as doctors or lawyers. Second, teachers can be motivated to teach harder their students. Education is very important factor for children who will lead our society. Some of the students will become doctors or lawyers. If they have not good education, we would not have good doctors and lawyers in the future. This is shows that teachers are playing a significant role in children’s life even though curing patients and helping people who have legal problems are important. In addition, more compete people will want to be teachers as teachers receive more wages. And they will try to teach their students harder and think about better method to teach. This shows that teachers should be paid as doctors and lawyers are done. To sum up, I agree with the idea that teacher should be given salary as much as doctors or lawyers for those reasons which I mentioned above. First, teachers are trying in their work as much as doctors of lawyers. Second, children can be educated more passionately. |