■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree are disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. | |
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It is not fair if teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Although it is teachers' roles that they need to teach wide range of knowledge to students, they have to go through some steps for students rather than for the purpose of their paying. Also for teachers, it is better to get fixed wages for their works for some reasons.
To start with, it is better to give selected wages to teachers for students. This is because if instructors' paying is depending on the range of their students' knowledge, some teachers would try to give much information to students just for their profits. The meaning of the teacher can also be changed if teachers should concentrate on teaching the more and more area of knowledge for their higher wages. Thus, with having time, professors need to teach students with many practises for them rather than teaching a lot more different topics, so learners can concentrate and study the subject step by step. As they learn with enough time, they can learn deeply and more comfortably because without enough time, it just causes stress and gives burden to students when they learn any subjects. Likewise, with teachers' comfort to teach students with enough time, students can concentrate on learning more at the same time.
Furthermore, some students cannot follow their professors' instruction and some of them just do not follow their teachers although they try to teach hard. As professors try to teach much information to students for their better wages, some students can have hardship to catch up and some students just do not want to follow it. For those of students, teachers' teaching can become meaningless work although teachers strive to teach them well. Therefore, for teachers, it would be better to have fixed wages because their hard working can lower their wages and this also can damage their stability of life, if their only job is teacher.
To summarize, I definitely believe that teachers should have fixed wages for their students and their fair wages. On the whole, I agree with that students need to have enough time when they learn any information. Also, for some students, it is unfair that teachers get lower wages although they teach hard. For more succesful teaching and better condition for teachers and students, it is best to give selected paying to instructors. | |
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