■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society? Give specific reasons to support your answer. | |
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It is hard for me to choose who have been contributed more on our lives between artists and scientists. Since the human-being have existed, both of them always took great part of lives. However, they differ from the quality and how they influenced on us. There are several examples supporting my opinion.
To begin with, scientists have influenced vast area of human lives through the developing the technology that is still progressing. To exemplify what I mean, some scientists developed the technology of agriculture so that we can get various kinds of food easily. It means that we can also get sufficient nutrients as much as we need them for our body. It, of course, keeps our health. Besides, the scientists also have invented numerous kinds of medicine to prevent and conserve our body from severe disease and fatal illness. There is one more example. Scientists also invented and developed the transportation means. It enormously affects our lives with convenience. It made us be able to reach anywhere we want trade or travel faster and more comfortable.
In contrast, artists affect our lives more on emotional ways. From long times ago, people danced and sang songs to relieve their stresses and fears. In my country, there is a kind of fortune teller, called Mu Dang. We pay them to dance that can get rid of the bad circumstances such as ghost attack and wish luck on lives. As well, we go to concert and theater to have fun with others and ease our stressful life.
It also helps us get better sociality.
In conclusion, In spite of the fact that both artists and scientists contributed on our lives for a long time, I insist that scientists gave a lot more things and better life to us than artists did due to the fact that they influenced on vast area such as economics, technology, and transportation. I even think that scientists contributed the art by in some ways, too
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