Topic : 아이들은 학교에 입학한 후에야 외국어를 배우기 시작해야 한다. 구체적인 이유와 예를 들어 자신의 견해를 뒷받침하시오.
Given the choice between learning English in early ages and doing in schooldays, I would like to choose studying English as early as possible. In this multi national world, conversation and using English naturally are considered the competitive abilities for people. Therefore, children should learn English as early as they can and acquire fundamental abilities such as speaking and listening for using English because early education can give them easy access for learning English. After early English leaning, they will speak and listen English without any burden compared with others who learn English later than them.
To begin with, children who learn English before entering school are beneficial. English ability is essential in this society because many industries and knowledge database share the idea and concepts all over the world to improve each part through accepting innovative items. What children learn English before entering school means that they prepare their grown lives for the future earlier so they will be able to qualify the condition to be great adults.
On top of that, studies show that learning English earlier is more beneficial in terms of leaning speed and efficiency. They have found that children who studied English from their early ages (3~5 years) can speak without xenophobia and listen English easily even though they meet some foreigners on the street by accident. In other words, the studies further demonstrate that learning English before entering school is better than doing it after entering school.
To sum up, children can take advantages if they learn English earlier because it provides a chance to prepare a wide range of social parts as well as it makes them implement English abilities easier that other children who learn English after entering school. On the whole, there is a reason why I strongly believe that learning English before becoming students ; English ability is most important qualification in the world.
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