The ability to read and write is more important today than in the past. |
It is often said that reading and writing are a base to study and to work today as well as in the past. However I disagree with the statement that the ability to read and write is more important today for two reasons. First, video can compensate a lack of ability to read and write. Second, speaking ability is more important. It is often said that reading and writing are a base to study and to work today as well as in the past. (unclear sentence) à It has been taken for granted that reading and writing is the basic skills to study and work for many years. However, I disagree with the statement that the ability to read and write is more important today for two reasons. (when you put a comparative, you need to identify another object being compared; in this case, your two objects will be time adverbs – today and in the past) à the ability to read and write is more important today than in the past. First, video can compensate a lack of ability to read and write (too specific to be one of your main support ideas; your second support idea is kind of big compared to this one. In other words, your two supports should be the same level). à Visual aids have become to compensate for lack of ability to read and write for those of who are not good readers or writers. Second, speaking ability is more important
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