■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new thinks and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific details and examples in your answer. | |
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After having new thinks in life, people can think more about their lives or the world. Trying to new thinks is great because it gives chances to people to live more enjoyable lives and makes more various experiences by taking some risks.
Always do what people already do well just limits their happiness in their lives. As they want to have enjoyable lives, they should try new thinks that they can see more diverse aspects of their lives. To illustrate this point, my uncle does not like to change anything, so he always have same routines of his life. As he has same every day life, he feels bored in his life. For his better life, my mother suggests a solution that he need to try anything that he can enjoy. Although he has some risks of his health because of his work, he tries to play a golf, which is his desire to play before. Later on time, although he was busy to work, he feels more interesting in his life, as he plays a golf. Likewise, people can have more enjoyable life if they try a new that what they want to do before although there is a risk.
Furthermore, having new thinks in people's lives with some risks always gives lessons with new experiences in their lives, although the experience is not so good for them. This is because the experience that fails to achieve any goal can be a motif that people can try another one or try again. For instance, long times ago, my father was afraid to make a new enterprise because he knows that there would have some risks in his life. However, with many risks, he just tries to build a new company. Unfortunately, it does not do well in the end. After that, he suffered from the experiences that he fails to take care of his new business because there were many risks that make him painful. However, with these experiences, he tries again. Because of his experiences that he failed before, he realizes some methods that is useful knowlege when he thinks of new enterprise. As he has experiences from thinking of new, he finally can achieve his goal.
To summarize, I definitely believe that trying to do new is benefits for everyone because it gives chance to have more enjoyable life and more experiences with lessons to our life. Although it has some risks if we thinks of new, it helps in many ways to having happier lives or achieving our goals. | |
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