People today pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities 부탁드려요 ㅠ_ㅠ..첨삭......제 위치를 꼬집어 주세요!!! |
It is debatable whether people have too much attention to regard with the privacy of famous people. Some people say that paying attention to the celebrities’ privacy is only an expression as love and for them to support their popularities. However, I am against the idea that people the attention to the famous celebrities are not too much because celebrities are injured by interesting too much and the excessively attentions may result in misleading information. To being with, extravagant notices can give the celebrities damages. These days, many mass media can broadcast a lot of contents in a short time so we can see the information right away. Shortly, we can share the information with people in a minute. To illustrate my point, Korean celebrity “Park Ji Sung” had a secret that he fall in love with a woman. He wouldn’t like to reveal the secret at that time. But the secret was unclosed by offering on a broadcasting company. He received a jolt. He couldn’t any activity on the shock. So I think that excessive attentions can harm the celebrities by unclosing what they don’t want. Moreover, paying too much attention is can transfer misleading information. It is possible that excessive attentions have a mistake by sensational conditions. a person’s paying too much attentions often have a biased view. So information is determined in prejudiced aspect by the person. This is the best example of my friend”John”. He hated a famous singer because he didn’t like his style on the musical stage. When he heard a base content in term of his personality, he talks about his friends and me with the issue. First, we are undoubted. But, it is revealed as a deceit by a mistranslation. Therefore, I believe that extravagant interesting has a possibility in respect to giving misleading information. In summary, I strongly believe that people’s attention to the celebrities is excessive at the present day since people can generate the events such as damaging the celebrities and offering misleading information. |