■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :young people are more influcenced by their friends than their family members. | |
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The characteristics and values of a person are often decided during his/her childhood period and of course young people have more opportunities to be influenced by their friends, but not by their family members. In this essay I will clearly develop and show my ideas.
The first reason for saying that young people have more opportunities to be influenced by their friends more than their family members is that they usually spend more than with their friends, not only in their school, but also outside the school. It doesn't take a genius to know that most young people like to play with their friends outside the house, rather than stay in their house and chat with their mom or dad. The more time they spend with their friends, the more opportunities for them to be influenced by their friends.
The second reason is that people who have lots of "bad" friends have more rates to do some illegal actions. According to the ARI, the most famous researching organization in Korea, the project which researched about the factor that make the young people to do an illegal action, shows that over 80 percent of young criminals said that they have some friends that are also in the jail. Moreover, most of young criminals said that their family members do not know why they were arrested. This research shows that it doesn't care how the person has great family members, if they do not take care of their children, and if they do not pay attention to their children, the young people will have more opportunities to be influenced by their friends.
The last reason is that most people, includes young people like to tell their secrets to their friends, buy not to their family members. The reason for this is because lots of people said that friends are likely to be more reliable that their family members, which means that most young people share their secrets with their friends, and to expose themselves to their friends. This phenomenon can shows that young people prefer to believe their friends rather than their family members. Which can make it easier for them to be influenced by their friends.
To summarize, young people are more influenced by their friends than their family because they believe their friends and rely on their friends rather than to do those on their family members. | |
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