Since people became rich, many people have started raising diverse pets such as a dog, a cat, a rabbit, and or an iguana. (이렇게 쓰시면 부자가 된 이후로 ~해왔다. 가 되구요. 부자가 되었기 때문에 키우기 시작했다 이렇게 쓰시려면 Since people have become richer, they began to raise diverse pets such as dog, cats, rabbits, even iguanas.)(다양한 동물들이라고 쓰셨으니 모두 plural로 써주시면 더 좋습니다.)
Variety pets give their owners a lot of affection and they usually relieve owner’s stress. All of pets are so good for those reasons, however the most favorite pets for me is a dog. A dog is the most famous pets to be loyal and trustworthy. Besides, they it have has several predominant capabilities like protecting an owner’s house. (복수형태로 쓰기 시작하셨으면 뒤에도 they, 단수로 쓰셨으니 it has가 맞습니다 )
To begin with, they are loyal for their owners. A sense of loyalty has derived from ancient tale. In my country, South Korea, there is a story that a dog rescued his owner who sinks was drowning in a lake. Through this story illustrates that a dog is the most loyal pets in all kinds of pets. Besides, a dog is more intimated as well as trustworthy than other pets, so a dog is a best pet for owners who rear pets at first.
In addition, they usually have a variety of abilities which only dogs only have. The reason why they have special skills is that their IQ and intelligence is superior to other pets. For instance, I have experiences once had to breed (breed는 번식을 위해 사육하다는 뜻으로 쓰입니다. Have만 쓰시면되요^^) both hamsters and 2 dogs. When I reared hamsters, they cannot could not do anymore for me and but just ate, slept, and even bitted(과거형: bit) my fingers. I thought that there is no value for breeding having them as pets. But my thinking was different when I raise 2 dogs. They did those bearings of course as hamsters did. But the two dogs were different. Besides, They protected my house and even they helped my other work. As a result, I feel felt that they are practical pet as well as cute and loyal pet.
To conclude, I would like to choose a dog as my favorite pet if I can raise a pet. They have a sense of loyalty and they can do anything other pets don’t because of their high intelligence. Through breeding , I can strongly recommend caring for a dog. by adult’s intelligence pets and children’s intimate friend in practical ways. |