■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased kwowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. | |
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In modern society, the euducation in college or university is becoming the absolute step for people. I believe there are many reasons why people want to attend college or university in several different perspectives, but here I mainly focus on the reasons in the term of job preparation.
First of all, people can increase their own capacities in the specific field. Colleges or universities are the advanced educational places, where people can learn professional knowledge or techniques. Throughout this period, students can become specialists.
Secondly, college or university can be a kind of bridge between school and society. In college, students can learn how to handle their assignments or projects and how to work in a team. Also, it is still acceptable for them to make a mistake because usually the mistake does not result in a severe problem. However, in the real society, a small mistake can lead to a big issue such as a financial one. Therefore, time in college or university is a good chance for the students to experience and adapt to the real world.
Finally, students can meet, study with and work with other people in college or university. Some of them study in the same field, which means there are more chances for them to can see each other in the society. Human cannot live alone. We have to give a help to another people or need a help of another people and this is somewhat not dependent on our own will. From this point of view, human network is really important, and colleges and universities are good place for people to make a network for future.
In conclusion, people want to attend a college or university because they can increase their capacities, practice the real world and extend their human network. All of these help them work in a society. | |
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