20년 후 사람들은 더 많은 여가시간을 가질 것이다. 동의? 반대?
정말 제가생각해도 어색한 문장이 많네요.. 몇점정도 나올까요?ㅠ_ㅠ;; 단어도 막상 쓰려니까 같은 단어만 자꾸 쓰게 되고.. 하여간.. 정말 잘 안되네요.. 저번 성적 정말 실망스러웠는데.. 별로 달라질게 없을거 같네요.. 고수님들 부탁드립니다. |
Some people say that people will not be able to have more leisure time after 20 year than these days. However, I agree with the idea that people will have more spare time later 20 year for two reasons. First, abruptly developing technology more and more enable people to have their free time. Second, many companies will provide enough leisure time more and more.
First of all, nowadays, most people have more spare time than past tanks to improving technology. These days, also, the technology is developing faster and faster than old time. Therefore, in the future, most people’s spare time will extend. Especially, computer technology will be one of the most factors of extending leisure time. To be specific, as the computer network field develops, office workers will do not have to work only in office. They can prepare their presentation which is very important for their company’s significant contract during going to work in train. Indeed, this will help workers finish their tasks earlier. So, they will be able to save time which would use to preparation in office. The saved time will turn to their free time. This shows that in future, many people have more spare time.
To sum up, I agree that people will have more leisure time after 20 year for those reasons that I mentioned above. First, well-developed technology help people save time. Second, a growing number of companies give their workers much spare time. |