■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on you community. | |
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If a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near my community, it would bring both advantages and disadvantages. These would affect economic and environmental areas.
First of all, the advantages would be an increasing number of job availability. When constructing a factory, it requires a lot of professionals and laborers in order to complete the task in time with strength. This means more opportunities for people are provided in construction field. Also, after the factory is built, it obviously needs employees working. This opportunity will help people who have basic skills and supervisors who are highly educated. This satisfies a wide range of people seeking for stable jobs.
Moreover, the result of high employment rate means boost in economy. In this era of a slow economy, it is crucial to retain stability and security of surplus in economy. Building the factory would ultimately guide a way out of this modern time of depression.
On the other hand, the evident drawback would be pollution. All sorts of pollution would be derived from the factory. For example, air pollution would be caused by toxic gases emitted from the factory due to combustion of fossil fuels. Water and soil pollution would be predicted from history of cooperate dumping. Noise pollution would be complained from neighbours due to the sound of machines and workers. All these would result in unfavorable and contemptible surrounding of the community.
The other problem would be traffic congestion. As many people would commute, severe traffic jam would be expected. This would increase frustration and stress of neighbours and even increase the rate of accidents due to impatience and hastiness.
All things considered, even though the advantages in economy are appealing. Unpleasant environment and increasing fights and accidents would drive people into insanity and unhappiness. The most valuable factor of the community is comfortable and suitable atmosphere not the money.
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