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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop you essay. | |
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Some people think that learning alone is beneficial because students can learn how to study independently. On the other hand, another opinion which is same as mine,people, including myself, argue that studying with teachers is preferable to studying alone. These are the following two reasons: students being able to study more efficiently and also being available to interact with teachers.
마지막 문장: There are two reasons to this argument: students can study more efficiently and they can also interact more with their teachers.
When it comes to efficiency there is nothing more preferable than studying with teachers. However, some might argue that studying alone can be more efficient in terms of knowing the most suitable way to study for themselves. This can be plausible fact true because students who study alone know the most suitable method to study in any form of subjects since they know the fittest way of studying independently. (바로 전 문장과 내용이 너무 겹쳐요) However, I can say that there will be much time spent on finding the efficient way of studying without any experiences,(이부분을 수동태보단 능동태로 students will spend ~~이렇게 써주세요) unlike teachers who all have been through the progress. Saving time is important for people who are learning without a doubt. Therefore, I believe that teachers are the best medium to students in learning the fastest and the most efficient way for studying. For example, I once studied mathematics by myself when I was in highschool. The formulas and equations made my head so dizzy, and I could not study very efficiently. so efficiency of studying mathematics was low. So, I got a math tutor and it really very helpful gave me a huge help, since the teacher delivered the needed knowledge clean and concisely based on her experience. It saved my time which was spent trying ot solve on silly math questions, so I was able to do other activities by using my time efficiently.
Moreover, students can also have a vibrate interaction during class through studying with teachers. Although there might be a doubt in the sense that studying alone can rather be passive form of studying. Since some think that teacher is the one who gives information to the student without involving students' incessant efforts are involved. However, imagine about students being taught by teachers. They can ask questions directly when they want to and also perform a vibrate discussion about the related topic which they are learning. In one word short, studying with teachers is the active form of studying through interaction happening among a teacher and a student in class.
In a nutshell, the efficiency in decreasing time for effecitve learning and also interaction happening between teachers and students, there is nothing desirable than studying with teachers. | |
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