Most children like that they to go to the see animals in zoo. Zoo includes amazing animals such as lions, tigers and bears. However these days many people argue that zee serves no practical function. I strongly oppose to their opinion. Since zoos is are not only convenience convenient culture facilities but also give good experience to young people experience.
First of all, most zoos provide many convenience convenient culture facilities. They have food courts, game rooms, animal shows and many other events in order to interest many people. Zoo provides animal shows as well as many facilities.-앞문장과 중복되요 이문장을 빼시고 많은 사람들이 동물을 보러만 오는 게 아니고 이런 facilities들을 이용하기 위해서 온다고 쓰시면 더 좋겠습니다. When I was, for instance, I went to the zoo, even though I observed many interesting animals in interested, I enjoyed the game room better than seeing animals.
On top of that, young people can’t see many animals in their home. However, zoo provides to young people to see many animals. Also, elementary students study life’s importance the importance of life through many animals in the zoo. Animal experts say that the more people are familiar to animals, the more they they will value life. occurs life importance idea. I think that animal equals to human because they have heart beat.
To sum up, today many zoos provide many advantageous factors to people. Recently some people say that Zoos serve no practical function and is should be closed. I don’t understand their opinion. I strongly oppose that zoo serve no practical function. In my opinion, zoo is many significant advantage facilities for our world. a very significant and advantageous facility in our world. |