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In modern days, people's lives are becoming busier with their works. Consequently, it is getting harder for them to have some free time. For this reason, it is of big important to use such valuable past time wisely. People diverge in their opinion concerning whether they should make a careful plan for their free time or just enjoy the time without any plan. Both planning and non-planning have their own advantages. In my opinion, however, the benefits of planning free-time activities outweighs those of non-planning for several reasons.
Of course, spending our free time without any specific plan can be a good idea, either. First of all, it has the advantage that we do not have to be stressed out thinking about how to plan. We are already tired enough just with caring about our workload. If we have to worry about making a good plan for the free time, it might be another source of stress rather than that of relaxing. Moreover, past time with no plan let us do whatever we want to do at a given time. Suppose that you planned to visit museum and then go to the concert that you already made a reservation. If you found the scenery around the museum is so beautiful and felt like stay there longer, you have to waste the money with which you bought the concert ticket. However, if you had no plan at all, then you can just stay where you want to stay without any worries.
Despite such advantages of making no plan for free time, as I mentioned above, it is wiser to plan carefully. The first reason is that we can make the most of given time. Our free time is limited. If today is Sunday, our free time is only until Monday comes. We have no time to waste. If set up a well-made schedule, then we can reduce the amount of time wasted. For example, if you go to movies without checking the time it start and running time, you might have to wait for the movie to start for, say, one hour. If you planned carefully, however, there is no need to run to be in time or waste your precious time. Furthermore, reservation in advance will save your time to wait in a long line.
Human being is animal who think about future, not just about present. The ability to plan is a gift from God with which we can make the most of our given time. We should use this ability to spend our past time wisely. |