■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :Being
different from others is helpful for achieving success.(AG)
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▶ There might be some people who believe that being different
from others is not helpful for achieving success. However, I personally
disagree with the above idea for two subsequent reasons. The first one is
uniqueness is important factor to success in competitive society and the other
is that different perspective makes people earn much money indubitably.
First of all, being different from others is decisive element
to succeed. To explain, These days is very competitive each other. To survive
in this world of endless competition, people ought to have unique abilities. In
the case of success in this society, everyone is aware that succeeding is like
a camel passing through the eye of a needle. One’s ability can be clouded easily
by other’s abilities so in order to stand out, a person must have special
abilities. According to research done by Korean Major Company Institution,
almost 80% respondents who are heads of personnel department from each company
said that “We want people who have unique characters”. This evidently shows
that differences lead to success.
On top of that, there are many succeeded people who have a
unique perspective. To be specific, Nowadays people concentrate on some unthinkable
idea. Take the example of Youtube creators. In the Youtube, a lot of people run
their channel by making their own contents. Especially, some people who have
more than 10milion subscribers make money more than ten thousand dollars per
month. Their feature is having peculiar content such as visual style and
photography. What this means that distinguished perspective is helpful for
achieving success.
In conclusion, being different is not only decisive element
to succeed, but also earn much money.
For these reasons, I strongly believe that success is
achieved by being different from others. |
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