■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people
think that it is better to working at company office rather than at home. However,
in my own point of view, working at home gives several benefits to workers. The
reasons are that atmosphere of workers home is comfortable and they could save
their time. To
begin with, labors’ house makes them comfortable. This is significant to
consider when to regard productability, because peaceful mind state of a person
is related to the efficiency of the work. For example, my sister has gone through
the improved work speed when she quit her job at the company and work at home.
She had a hard time working with others who are aggressive and argumentative.
It was stressful experience to her and she was unable to concentrate on her
tasks due to unpleasant environment. Now she makes money at home through her
laptop, and she finish her daily tasks faster than before.
On top of that, work at home can make people
to save their time and use their time more effectively. People who work at home
do not have to commute to their work place. Even more, they can choose their
working time at whenever they want. To be specific, some people are night owls
who prefer to do their job at night. However, general labor time fit on day
time which force night people to work at the time-period that are not suitable
for them to make the best results. If these people could work at home, they
could do their work at any time they want.
To sum up, do work at home are beneficial
due to cozy atmosphere and effective time usage. In this regard, I made an
agreement on the statement that working at home using computers or telephones
is better than working in the office. |
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