▶ Your Answer : Some people might argue that getting news from sources that have common in their way of thinking is good method. However, in my opinion, I think that reading news provided by people who think differently is better way to get sources. I think this way for two reasons, which I explore in the following essay. To begin with, getting opposing opinion helps to improve statement clearly. There could be some mistaken idea or minor error in thoughts. While people get sources from counterpart who have different idea, they can find out those misconception and revise it to perfect. My own experience demonstrates convincing evidence of this. When I was freshman, I was preparing for debating tournament. The main topic was about 'Death Penalty' which I disagree with. I had difficulty to find out evidence of it. I, however, surfed internet about reason why the death penalty needed, and got many idea why it has to be exist searched internet to find different sources concerning with death penalty. After I gathered information of counterpart, I was able to write down my opinion clearly. If I have tried to get information only from similar stance, I could have not organize organized my opinion properly. On top of that, it could develop thoughts to the next level which means create a new idea. To be specific, when people encounter to debating idea, they struggle to overcome the situation. In the consequence, people can figure out new method. There was a German philosopher who argue argues this phenomenon. Hegel argue argues that thesis and antithesis encounter each other, it will be synthesized to another solution. For example, there is a recent study conducted by Seoul University to determine better way to make new idea whether using opposite idea or similar one. It resulted in seventy-seven percentage of people who got opposite idea are more likely to make new idea easily. This is because different idea helps them broaden their viewpoint, they, therefore, enhance their idea creatively. This is obvious evidence that getting different news from my opinion is better way. To sum up, getting opposing opinion makes their statement clearly, and also it enhances our thoughts that helps people more creative. In this regard, I think that it is better to get news from people who thought differently. Fair: 17~23 점수: 21 이단 문법적인 오류들이 몇몇개 있습니다. 제가 첨삭한 것을 보시고 확인 하시길 바랍니다. 또한 문제가 된다라는 부분은 두 번째 바디입니다. 두 번째 바디는 무슨 말을 하려고 하는 지 모르겠습니다. 핵심적인 내용이 뭔지 모르겠습니다. 도대채 왜 이 이유가 주제를 서포트 하는지 잘 모르겠습니다. 좀 더 명확하게 하기에서는 이 이유에 대한 구체적인 설명이 꼭 필요해보입니다. 그게 부족하기 때문에 무슨 말을 하려고 하는 지 잘 모르겠습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |