▶ Your Answer : Some people think that buying foreign products is better than domestic ones. However, in my opinion, purchasing domestic items would be beneficial for me. There are two reasons why: First, company who makes domestic products has well equipped service than foreign ones. Second, foreign products are rare in our society.
To begin with, many customers have to consider the quality of items and the service only after merchandise is purchased. If the company did not have a solution that buyers want to help, they would be susceptible to outdated company. Regardless of cost, buyers want the company to solve the problem now and later (어떤 problem에 대한가요? 너무 ambiguous합니다 구체적으로 명시하시길 바랍니다). For instance, when I was 20 years old, I was iPhone user. However, when my cell phone was not working, I could not do anything due to the fact that there were not after service but exchange referred to as refer. Eventually, I changed my phone made in our country. Due to the fact that it has been after service, I can go to the service center easily when something is wrong. As a result, I felt convenience in the way that exist service center.
On top of that, foreign items are uncommon to see in our market. At present, the people that who want to buy foreign ones are surfing the site based overseas. Suppose that there are is a precious foreign item and domestic item that are similar to foreign one. Would it be possible to continuously zoom in on searching foreign item? It is highly doubtful. The only key to relieve stress of searching is to purchase domestic products. For example, according to the survey conducted by the Institution of Psychology, two items are situated in the same place. One is widespread domestic items and the other is rare items. As the subjects did not have enough time, 80% of people would buy domestic items. It is the reason that people do not afford to search on uncommon item. As a result, they felt that it is plausible for buying internal products as fast as they can.
To sum up, considering the convenience of having service comfortably, there seems to be no reason for me to buy foreign products these days. In this regard, I firmly believe that making use of items made in our country is rational selection. Fair: 17~23 점수: 20 일단 제가 에세이를 읽으면 서 느낀것은 각 바디의 이유가 논점이 맞지않고 논리적이지 않다라고 생각합니다. 이 에세이를 통해서 본인이 말하려고 하는 것은 내수 시장의 상품들을 사야하는 것 이 났다라는 것인데. 이러한 것을 주장하기 위해서는 좀 더 왜 내수 상품들이 좋은지에 대한 장점들을 더 명확하게 명시하는 것이 좋습니다 어떠한 부분에서 외국 상품이 안좋은 지를 말하는 것도 중요하고요. 이것을 항상 주의하면서 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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