■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
Q. which one is better for the living? the city VS Rural district. |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people might think that rural area is better for the living. This is because the rural area provides many chances to see the natural environment and to enjoy calmly atmosphere. However, in my opinion, I prefer to live in the urban area for the following reasons. First, living in a city is convenient to use living and cultural facilities. Second, studying in the city has many chances to be assisted by other academic institutes. To begin with, cities have a number of convenient facilities and cultural places such as supermarkets, banks, post offices, theaters and so on. It means that people who live in the city easily go to any store (any + 단수명사! always!) or cultural place compared to people who live in the countryside. I will take my personal experience as an example. When I was young, I lived in the rural area. So, at that time, I was felt the need to live in the city many times while going to the school or supermarket. always, I needed to take a bus or a personal car to go anywhere. My village did not have convenience stores. Going to some store by walking was inconceivable. In addition, to watch a movie at the theater needed anhour of driving by a personal car. Living in rural areas means that consuming a lot of commuting time on the road and money, which buy for costs gasoline. On top of that, given the educational aspect, cities are a useful place for students. It is clear that rural areas are scant about academic institutes and activities, which students need for improving their academic performance. Also, from my experience, the school in the rural area has lower positive peer pressure that helps students motivate each other. For instance, when I was a middle school student. I attended the school that was located in countryside. So the number of my class students was just 15people. At this time, no one had studied hard for attaining of their purpose. I did not have interest in academics too. Before long, especially, I made poor marks in mathematics. Therefore I wanted help from others when studying math. math studying from other. But my province had no private academic institutes or private tutors. To sum up, given the choice between the city and a rural district, I would choose the city. Living in a city is convenient for going to some stores and cultural place and helpful in studying. For all these reasons, I think that the city is the better place for living. |
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