▶ Your Answer : Given article and lecture both focus on a
manned mission to the Mars. Contrary to the article which proposes several
obstacles to the mission, professor in lecture explains how those problems can
be overcame. First, dust in the Mars has been mentionned
as a possible obstacle in the article because they can hinder the performance
of machine and also astronaut. However, the professor presents the soundwave as
a solution since the wave can pull off those particles.
Next, the article suggests that there can
be a psychological problem during a long and isolated mission, but this is also
rejected by the professor ; astronauts sent to the universe usually complete
extensive training to deal with possible mental illness and there are couple of
programs available to give them a realm in spaceship.
Finally, according to the lecture,
financial problem described in the passage can be solved by international
cooperation. The professor gives an example of space station as a result of
cooperation from different countries, and he also says that even though there
will be no immediate benefit from those expensive space projects, it is still
valuable since it can bring a scientific advance in various fields.
Fair: 17~23 점수: 21 일단 이 에세이를 읽어 가면서 느낀 것은 통합형 에서 중요하게 여긴 것들이 다 보여지지 않는 거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 중요한 역활을 하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 서로 어떻게 비교하고 반박하는 건가 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘다 서로 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 좀 더 설명들을 더 서술해주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |