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토플공부에 허덕이다 시험을 일주일 즈음 앞둔 지금은 그냥 놀고 있네요. 공부가 잘 안됩니다. 그냥 편하게 가려구요. 마치 전화를 받다 연습장에 쓴 낙서처럼... 산으로 들로 바다로 놀러다녀요. 밤늦게 집에 들어와서 글 한편씩 써보고 자는데, 한 말씀씩 던져주시는 여러분들이 너무 감사합니다.
오늘 주제는 밑에 어떤 분이 깔끔하게 글을 아주 잘 써주신 내용과 동일해요. 너무 잘쓰셔서 부러울 정도라, 저도 언제쯤 저렇게 쓸 수 있을까 생각합니다.
평가바랍니다. 몇점정도 나올까요? 시간이 있으시다면, 귀중한 시간 할애해서 첨삭도 부탁드려요.
좋은하루 되십시오^^ |
Most of people believe that the internet is useless for the reason of worthless information. I agree that it is not baseless opinion, but I think the internet is the definitely useful and advantageous for people, since people can save their resource, and can build social relation through the internet service. First of all, people can excess an enormous amount of valuable information without spending their resource especially times and money. The internet represents for the ocean of knowledge. Generally, the ocean has plenty natural resource, and the usage of the ocean is depended on its user. In this view, the internet acts as the ocean for the people. The important thing on the internet is not the problem whether the internet is bad or good, but how people apply the advantage of the internet. To clarify this, my example would explain the advantages of internet. I have interested on a psychology, I thus read many books related the field of a psychology. Since my major of the college was not a psychology, I felt the limitation of the information that i afford to get. I foraged the internet to find what I want to know, eventually I happened to know that the Moreover, the internet has an important role as so called a method of building social relation. There are many kind of network service program that support people to keep in touch with those of friends on online such as My Page in Yahoo, Facebook originated In conclusion, I believe that the internet is the ocean, which gives us a lot of things, if people want to get it. I insist that how the information on the internet can be used is perfectly depend on the ability of people. Therefore, the internet itself is valuable asset on the world. |