우리나라와 직접적인 관계가 없는 외국의 상황이나 event를 우리가 알아야 하는가??? |
Many people think there are no relation between the events that were is happened in the foreign country and us. Also many people acclaim that (happen자동사-수동태안돼요) there are direct or even indirect relation with our country. I strongly believe
that the events that were happened should be known for several reasons. happened The first of all, the world has become more smaller because of the
transportation and telecommunication development. That means the
events of foreingers should affect us even there are far from us. There are foreign countries can~ they are some examples about this concept. First, when SARS outbroke in China, (about이하삭제) many countries include Korea had to be aware of this news. People who including traveled to China could spread the disease to foreign countries even are (주어 located over the ocean by the way of air-plane. Second example is about 없어요??) the outbreak of the disease that is occured to the cows in U.S. So for the occur역시 자동사-수동태 안되요. people who eat American meat had to be aware of it.
The second, people, who work abroad, are increasing. Person, who has A person the citizenship of Korean could work in New York for business, should korea know the information of New York and the issues of the location where the the region person is going to live. Also people who work abroad for the same who are working in multi-national com companies where he or she worked in his or her own countries are panies are increasing. increasing. For my uncle he worked for Samsung in Suwon, Korea for For example, my uncle~ several years ago, but now he works for Samsung is Shanghai in China. located in Shanghai, China This type of people should know abundunt information and events that is enough related to the foreign countries.
The third, many tests and interviews for entering the companies or the
universities required ample knowledge and issues of other countries. They require deep(ample은 주차장이 넓다할때 쓰는 말인듯-공간) may ask the affect of SARS and the impact of the Iraq War in the test.
Employers or the teachers try to choose interviewees with abundant the 빼시고~ may want the interviewees to know ab~ information which is required to interact with the certain problems. solve the problme with international affairs. To sum up, it is very essential for people to know the events happening
around the world, or in the foreign countries for the reasons; globalization these reasons: of the world, increase of population of working abroad. and increasing population working abroad.
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