[Grade encourages students to learn more.] |
Some people say that grade is not a good way to encourage students to learn more.
However, I disagree that grade are given a good chance to students encourage. >However, I disagree because grade gives good chance to encourage students.
There are two reasons why I agree with advantage of giving grade.
On the one hand, it will be motivate among students because student want to get high grade rather than other classmate. > On the one hand, it will motivate students (to work harder) because students want to get higher grade than other classmates.
By occurring competition among students, they will study more by themselves. >They will study more while encouraging competition among themselves.
On the other hand, in teacher’s shoes, it is more helpful to students because teacher understand easily according to the student’s each grades. >On the other hand, in teachers' shoes, it is more helpful because they can understand each of their students by their grades.
And then, teacher help student encourage themselves. >Then, teachers can help students encourage themselves. To begin with, nowadays, society is going to be competitive. >To begin with, nowadays, society is getting more competitive.
Without ability, people do not survive in fierce society. >Without ability, people cannot survive the fierce society.
What I mean is that giving grade will be a good way to prepare for entering real society.
It is sure that grade shows the student’s output of one semester. ?.
Most students are going to make an effort for getting higher grade than they already got one. >Most students are going to make effort to get higher grade than the one before.
Let me take my experience as an example.
When I was in high-school, my school is chosen the method of giving grade according to every semester’s exams. >When I was in high school, my school had a grading system that graded every exams in one semester.
At first, I did not like this method because I always got lower grade that I had expected. >At first, I did not like this method because I always got lower grade than I had expected.
However, I saw the grade of my best friend and I motivated from her. >However, I saw the grade of my best friend and I got motivated from her.
This is why I will challenge myself to get better grade rather than my friend’s one. >This was why I challenged myself to get better grade than my friend's .
It was a good trial to me because grade makes me study more by myself without any one’s force. >It was a good trial for me because grade made me study more, without other people having to force me.
While prepare next exam, I and my friend encourage a lot each other. >While preparing for the next exam, my friend and I encouraged each other a lot.
In this sense, giving grade will not only motivate among students but also lead students to study by themselves. >In this sense, giving grade will not only motivate students but also lead students to study voluntarily. Second, it is easy to evaluate student’s degree of understanding.
If teacher notice student’s degree of understanding, they could give a help to student more conveniently. >If teacher notice student's level of comprehension, the teacher could give help to student more easily ( conveniently)
It will be encourage student’s heart because students are going to make study plan is based on each one’s understanding. To sum up, grade makes a lot of advantage which is helpful to students to study more. >To sum up, grade has a lot of advantages, which is helpful in that students study harder.
It is a good evaluation of understanding about student as well as encouraging student’s motivation. >It is a good evaluation for understanding students as well as encouraging students.
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